CASE STUDY: Best Forex Signals 2019

alright welcome back guys and happy New Year to you again so we started off with the smash-and-grab smash-and-grab is a proven template that will help you to triple your account within 30 days okay some of you guys say wild trip on my account well yeah triple your account and what we established to do is we said we would bring you a case study actually showing you how this is actually done okay so we started off with a fund in our account so the account is with recommended broker I see market so the link is below if you want low spreads you want a true ecn account that’s who we recommend you should go with and if you’re in the US or somewhere else we have another recommendation but let’s put aside the recommendations it’s not what we’re here for we’re to look at the 500 dollars that we funded this account with on the 7th of January okay this is the atom at FX pro template that I use to confirm my trades and here you can see this is a live account okay because it’s coming up to market close quite soon so this is actually one of the trades that we took today in our pip room or a signal group and we caught this trade more or less from the top think it ended 90 pips and it may actually drop some more right so we’re looking at these trades here so I started off on the 7th ok and you know we had some wins we also had some losses and what we did found what what I did find actually is that managing different telegram groups guys helping traders to be better traders to make more profit to make better decisions managing my own accounts doing a case study you know having a family and doing all this and updating updating and editing videos to YouTube every single day I don’t think so so I’m gonna make a commitment you guys write that we’re gonna do a weekly update if you want to see more proof if you want to see us do 723 pips as we did last week close to probably 600 odd maybe 700 odd again this week inside the pip which is our premium VIP signal group then contact me message me below we can get you situated and get you getting the sort of results that you’re gonna see in a minute so we started this with $500 as you can see life took over and life took over for a while I wasn’t able to trade as much as I wanted to and there were some amazing trades last week but here here we go so we started on the fourth and as last week nothing’s changed I haven’t I haven’t stopped helping people but mentally I was more committed to it okay that’s all you got to do is make a mental commitment to it whenever you can trade be around and make a commitment right we help you with that with inside the pit room so here you go start it off a few trades you know obviously some small trades pay attention to the lot size as well that I’m using guys okay I’m not using crazy lot sizes so I’ve got a $500 count and in terms of risk management I’m going to use certain lot sizes so here we go so we get ya lovely take profit there you do not get any extra points for it in take profit guys okay take profit means when you’re in profit take your profit if you’re happy move on to your next trade no extra points for taking profit all right so you might not see many of those but here we go a couple of trades here oh yeah so we had one loss that was one loss here but the rest of the trades as I scroll through you can slow motion if you want this is a live account oh we had another take profit here but as you can see we had one loss now I’m not saying that the group didn’t have one loss and I’m not saying that I got lucky and I chose trades which were winners no there’s no way of you seeing which trades are gonna win or not I’m picking and choosing what I’m saying is that having run the account that as you can see here having run the account that the counts made seven hundred twenty three twenty nine starting with five hundred dollars of a deposit which was made on the seventh and you’ve got profit two hundred and twenty three dollars right fantastic would you be happy with that if you’d be happy with that and you want to wait till next week when we actually compound this to another number and I’m probably thinking that will get close to triple in this account next week in two weeks the plan is to do it in in four weeks but who knows and like I said life could take over so you may start like I did and in your first week you may not be able to trade as you wanted to because you had other things to to handle that’s okay doesn’t mean that they you know it continues it doesn’t mean that you have to triple it within 30 days it doesn’t matter if you did it in 20 days so long as you tripled your account so long as you made double your investment so what if you don’t triple it the plan is there but what if you fall short by a couple of dollars so what I’m trying to say you want to get on board this guy’s if you’re serious about improving your trading guys you want to get around people who are making quality decisions and helping others to improve their trading then you want to go to the link below you want to look through the page have a look at what’s what’s included you know and what we actually do for trade is we’re more than just a signal group okay a signal service providing signals and many a members would attest to that as well but have a look at what I discovered using the template which is going to be some tips to you and if you want to reach out to me and ask me any questions please do but right now we’re going to zoom over to the template so we’re looking at the template now and you can see that step one of the plan is to get the right broker I mean if you click on the link you’ll be able to get all of this information and get you situated within the pit room but you know you want to get quality pips you know we provide quality pips for you you want to download the template and also it gives you a guide of like risk management what size lot sizes you should be doing and if you speak to any of us we can guide you on that depending on your account balance okay because if you have you know an account balance of more than 20k then you might want to speak to us about how this plan can be personalized for you as well too okay and yeah just some of the best practices as well so that’s that’s available for you okay and here we have the template which is a spreadsheet and you can tweak the amount here well like I said I started with five hundred dollars and I’m aiming for about 40 pips if I do more so I know I need to use a lot size of 0.05 just ignore these other columns for now these are the columns but 0.05 is a is perfect and what you’ll find is that once you get day 2 you can actually just continue you know it’s a guide you’re using 0.05 0.05 you may actually make more so it means that you can immediately go to day day 4 on the chart ok once you get to day 4 on the chart you want to increase your lot size so this is compounding guys you know this is not just using 0.05 all the way through that’s not going to get you there using consistent lot sizes and is going to secure your profits and ensure you that you have consistency going forward but what’s gonna do it is how this plan actually compounds and lets you know what your daily profit target is and when you should stop trading so on day one $20 that’s it you can stop all right but if you hit 40 that’s great but realize that 20 minimum is what you want to move to the next step now us now we’re at you know we’re in week 1 which is really 5 days trading isn’t it Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday we should be at 6:08 but we’re actually at 7:23 so the day is not closed yet because we still have a couple of trades running but what you’ll find is that we’ll probably start around here even if even if we started here with the closed trades right we could immediately start using a lot sizes of 0.07 now if you want to open multiple positions I perhaps suggest that if you don’t have experience that you want to maybe split that 0.07 into maybe 0.03 0.04 and kind of like do it that way ok but we give you all that guidance within the pit room ok and here you go you don’t need guidance you just need to follow the plan guys and what you’ll find is by day 30 your you’ve tripled your account okay now okay I don’t have $500 I only have 400 change the amount 4% daily growth again what happens after 30 days brown okay this isn’t ready to showcase this this is really just to let you know that I found again that you don’t have to stick to that whatever profit target your app use a lot sizes once you get that if you if you don’t if you get to say the six day and you’re are not profitable on that day for whatever reason and you just go back a step start again don’t worry about oh it’s day seven I should be here oh my god this isn’t working no no no this is not emotional there’s no there’s no smiley face on this this is just facts stick to the facts guys and get to your profit target emotion Leslie which is tripling your account and I’ll never let no one tell you that you can’t do it because we’re gonna continue to show you how it’s done and show you proof within our group of people even if they don’t triple their account who cares you know if they if they get here that’s better off than where they were where they would have started and I’m sure you would agree so get with us guys we’re serious about making traders profitable we’ve been doing it last year we’re gonna continue to do it this year and this is just the beginning of many things that we have planned for you in our you know in our sessions whether you’re in our free signal group get in one daily signal which we have that’s fine or whether you realize the potential in you join our paid members group that’s absolutely fine or if you just want to share your trade ideas in another group of traders that’s absolutely fine but get around us we’d love to have you around as we love to help you we love you to also share your experience and we’re going to bring you more weekly updates and if you want more check check us out contact us right down below there’s a link to myself and until next time you trade well [Music]

Why Your Content Marketing Isn’t Working

Content marketing works. I mean, the proof

is there. I’ve been sharing these statistics for 8 years now. HubSpot has done this famous

study on blogging. They looked at over 13,500 bloggers and they found out that the blogs

marketers published, the more inbound traffic they got to their website. And they found

that an accumulation of more content brings more leads. For example, those who published

more than 400 blogs got twice as much traffic as those that have less than 400 blogs. And

if you’ve read my blogs, you know this one too. The current ROA (Return on Advertising)

is as low as 0.6. That went way down from 11.8 times ROA back in 2016. Compare it to

the ROA on organic content, which is anywhere from 14 to 16 percent conversion from your

onsite traffic. But here’s the thing. The average time spent to see content marketing

results are anywhere from 12 to 18 months. That’s what Joe Pulizzi said.

Now, after 8 years of building content, we see results like Top 3 of Google results in

as little as 30 days, but that’s not realistic for most new content marketers. Here’s the

thing about content marketing that you have to know; it works but only if you set it up

to work. Hey guys, I’m Julia McCoy, I’m a growth-focused

content marketer. I identify as a content hacker, which is the name of my new brand

launching this June. I’m also the CEO of Express Writers and Author and Blogger. Thank you so much for joining me on today’s

video. So, those statistics on content marketing that I shared at the beginning of this video,

that more content equals more leads; consistency is key and the proof is there that content

does work way better than traditional advertising. Well, I’ve been sharing those for years now

and what I see are a lot of marketers still stuck in a rut.

Today’s video is for those that are in that rut. I’m going to call you out because I care

about you. I think that many of you are just a few feet away from what could be content

marketing greatness. But here’s the thing, if you’re not getting the fundamentals right,

which we’ll go over in a minute, and you’re not being consistent about producing great

content, all the while complaining about a lack of leads, traffic, visitors and ultimately

sales. Well, I can tell you if you just sat down and fixed some of these glaring problems,

those leads, those visitors, those sales would come. \

The real problem in concert marketing is that most content marketers think of content as

a quick fix, instead of building a house, which to really be successful that’s what

it’s like. And why are thinking of it like that? They’re over here complaining about

all the things they don’t have — those traffic leads and sales — which they could have if

these fundamentals and principles were right. We’ve got to stop being absent on our company

blog. We’ve got to fix our site fundamentals that are wrong. We need to have a professional

take a look at all that icky content we’ve just let hang on our websites. It\’92s time

for us to stop complaining about the things we wish we had and start doing something about

it. Content marketing action takers are the content marketing winners. \

I’m a College dropout and I figured out content marketing after years of trial and error.

My story is proof that anyone can see content success. I’ve been blogging, I haven\’92t

missed a week for 8 years now. We’re at 90,000 visitors a month on our site and 14 to 16

percent of those leads are converting. We’re not the only success story of content; Moz,

Unbounce, CoSchedule, these are a few big players in the marketing and software industries

that have built their presence through great content.

OK. So, if you’re here watching this and you’re just not seeing success from your content,

let’s talk about how to fix that. I’m going to give you 3 ways that you can start implementing

today and you will see results start to happen right away. And long-term, you\’92re going

to be building that foundation for a great house where leads can find you, interact with

you and then eventually, buy your stuff. \ Number one: if your site isn’t fast, well

built, stable, user friendly, or built at all, this is your first step. \

OK guys, so Google has said that conversions drop by 12 percent per second of load time.

The more time it takes to load your site, the less your human lead, buyer, audience

member, is going to stick around. And a recent study done in 2017 has showed that one full

second — ready for this — can decrease conversion rates by 70 percent. So, if you have a website

and you’re not in that bracket of don’t even have a website yet, we’ll talk about you guys

soon. You can use this tool — I’m going to put it on the screen www.tools.pingdom.com

this is a free site speed checker. So, use this. See how fast your site is and if it’s

not fast, then you need a site developer to help you fix your site speed. \

OK. So, for those of you need who need your website fixed, rebuilt, and then for those

people who don’t even have a website yet, go get a WordPress developer. And you can

use a site like Upwork to quickly find top rated freelance developers that work per hour,

so it’s going to be easy to budget. You can set a budget, have them work by the hour,

pay them by the hour and for work done. WordPress developers can clean your site, fix your site,

rebuild it if it’s broken. If it’s not on WordPress, put it on WordPress, which by the

way, is one of the most SEO-friendly platforms out there. And make your site clean, beautiful,

user-friendly, fast. This should be your goal with your website and nothing less. And this

will lead to fit everything you do in content because without a good site, you can’t serve

good content. And you don’t even need to spend more than $30 to $50 an hour to find a really

good WordPress developer to help you out. And if you’re needing a brand-new site done,

that could cost you anywhere starting at $500 — $1000, depending on how many pages you want

to start out with. So, go get a great website, rebuild one if yours is crap, build one now

if you don’t have one. You’ll thank me later. \

Number two: research and put together an SEO report.\

I do this weekly. I research keywords for almost every new blog we create. Think of

finding the right keywords like this: you have a great house built, but you don’t have

your driveway yet and you don’t have your house number, how are people going to find

you? As do your keywords; optimizing your site with the right keywords to pull in the

people that are looking for you and your services on the web is like adding that number to your

house on the mailbox or paving that driveway, so people can drive up to your house and access

it. Without this house number, without this driveway, people are not going to find your

house. The same is true of not doing keyword research. Now, if you’re already known, you\’92re

an influencer, you’re a celebrity, you don’t have to do keyword research. But if you’re

none of the above, you should be doing it. \

After 8 years of doing consistent SEO research, I still find all these untapped opportunities

of low hanging fruit, where there is very little competition for a keyword and I can

create some great content around it, and rank in in the top 3 or 5 of Google. No matter

your niche, your industry, there are keyword opportunities out there. And get a Pro to

help you research these keywords if you don’t know what you’re doing. These tools are expensive.

For example, SEMrush is $100 a month but it’s one of the best tools you could use. Keyword

Finder is another great tool; it’s a little bit less cost, it starts around $20 or $30

a month. But once you have these tools, you need to know what you’re looking for, that’s

an art in and of itself. A link to a resource in this video description, where I talk about

how to find good keywords. \ And remember, a heavy trend in SEO is the

quality of the content on your site. So, once you have those keywords, the work isn’t done.

You need to create high quality content around those keywords. Otherwise, Google is just

not going to rank your site. If your content is riddled with typos, if the facts are missing,

if links to back up statistics aren\’92t there, this list goes on, that continent isn’t quality

and Google isn’t going to rank it. So, just like you wouldn’t try to build your house

yourself or remodel your kitchen yourself, unless you were a professional contractor,

don’t write your content yourself. If you don’t know how to build high quality onsite

content, get a writer and the long-term dividends will truly pay off. I promise you. \

OK, number 3, the last point: plan and set a consistent amount of content to happen on

your site on the regular. \ The best and easiest way to do this is through

a blog on your website. So, I’ve been able to uphold this goal of one high quality blog

per week, going strong for 8 years now. Some weeks, we publish two, three, four but our

goal is one per week at the minimum. So, we’ve been doing that for 8 years. I know marketers

that have been doing that for 20 years and that’s how they’ve built a huge presence and

a huge following. So, consistency in great content is really most of the secret sauce

to great content marketing once you have your fundamentals right. Also, images are really

important. You don’t just want to post content; you want to add great visuals. Take a look

at The Write Blog. So, everything we publish here has a uniquely designed header set. This

is something that I ask my designer to create for us, she creates it in Adobe Illustrator.

It’s super high quality and all the colors and styles match our brand — we have a clear

brand style. Using images, creating beautiful custom images for each blogpost, is a great

way to help your blog get more eyeballs. And don\’92t forget your social media, you need

to be sharing the content out that you create, so your friends, your followers, people that

might eventually become clients can find it and read it and interact with it. \

Email Marketing is going to be important of blogging too. You want to build a list, send

your new blogs to your list every week. \ OK, so that’s it, 3 ways to start getting

your fundamentals right so you can see content marketing success a lot sooner. And like I

said, this is a lot like building a house. This is not that cheap or fast or overnight

trick to get more sales and leads. It’s a consistent over time effort to bring long-term

results. And if you think about it, isn’t everything good in life kind of like that?

For example, marriage, you know; I have to work it out every day. I have to choose to

love my partner every day. Parenting is a lot like this too; you have to love your kid,

nurture your kid every day. So, why would we think of Marketing as anything different?

Why would we think that a quick trick is going to get long-term huge results? It’s just not

going to happen. \ I wanted to say this for the end because I

don’t want you to feel like you’re being pitched. Value is my main focus but if you need your

keywords researched, great content written, even a free content strategy consultation,

we do all that at Express Writers. We’re here to help businesses like yours grow through

content. You can get in touch with us today. You can actually see our services and our

pricing at www.expresswriters.com/content-shop Thanks so much for watching today’s video.

Want more content marketing real talk? Hit that subscribe button and then don’t forget

to hit the bell so you get notified every time I publish a new video.

And I’d love to hear what you thought of today’s video in the comments. So, let me know and

I’ll see you guys around.

How to write a Personal Statement for university | Motivation Letter | Letter of Intent

hello friends hello nerds welcome everyone to this video now tis the season for applications so I’m assuming you clicked on this video because you need to write a personal statement slash motivation letter slash letter of intent for university that you’re applying to and you don’t want to just read any letter but you want to write the best behemoth greatest everything that has ever come out of your brain maybe you don’t consider yourself the best writer because you’re in science or engineering or whatever but that’s why I’m here for you and that’s what I’m gonna help you because I’ve done it I’ve done it too many times more than I can count I was gonna say I’ve done a hundred times but that would be a clear lie but I’ve done it a lot and I’ve written some really really great motivational letters so today I’m gonna share with you how to write a personal statement now in this video this is gonna be a lot of information and actually I have a lot more information to share that will not fit into this video so I made a freebie that you can download it’s at the end of the video so if you watch to the end I’ll tell you how to get that freebie and in addition to the freebie at the end of the video vlog missus just started today and I’m gonna be doing vloggers I’m gonna be doing vlogmas this month and everyday when I published my vlog I’m going to include a question answer about a personal statement so throughout the month of December feel free to write on the video feel free to email me at Jessica at stubborn and calm feel free to DM me on Instagram with your questions and if it’s a question that I have an answer in this video and that isn’t in the freebie to follow then I will be sure to answer it in one of my daily vlogs for vlogmas so I know what your first question is it is what is the difference between a personal statement a letter of motivation or motivation letter or letter of intent blah blah blah you’ve scoured the Internet you hundreds of different blog posts that all give you different information one blog post says that a personal statement focuses on your past projects whereas a motivation letter focuses on your future goals but then you go to a university website and they say write a personal statement and make sure to include your future goals then you’re like okay well is that supposed to be a motivation letter because I’ve written a motivation letter but they said I think want a personal statement so is that different or sometimes they don’t give you any guidelines at all so what’s the answer the answer is that there is no strict format to a personal statement or a letter of intent or motivation letter it’s not like a persuasive essay or a poem where there are strict rules for how to write them okay and in my mind they’re all different and they’re all the same and you’re like just why do you have to make things so complicated it’s because we’re writing the best letter ever the way we approach writing a personal statement and a motivational and a motivational letter will be the same so in that sense you don’t need to worry about what the difference is but even though the approach is the same for all of the letters that doesn’t mean that all of your letters are going to end up being the same you’re not just gonna write one generic letter that could be sent as a personal statement as a motivation letter as a letter of intent because let’s be real you want to get accepted to the top University so you need a top notch letter that means you can’t send the same letter to every University a letter of motivation a personal statement a letter intent they’re all the same because your best application letter will contain elements of all three of those letters that’s how you write the best application ever so with that out of the way this is how you’re going to write your best personal statement letter of motivation letter of intent most important part the research before you can start writing you need to know what you’re gonna say okay you can’t just your way through a personal statement especially in science and engineering if you’re just gonna be writing frivolous sentences full of fluffy smart words the admissions committee is literally gonna pick up your letter rip it in half and throw it in the trash you need to know what you’re gonna say before you write or else they’re just gonna end up writing so how do you do that how do you figure out what you’re gonna write research that’s the first step so what are you gonna research well first go to each University you want to apply to check what their requirements are maybe one University says oh we want to hear about your goals then you’re like okay that’s a good thing I know now I know kind of what I’m gonna start writing another University says to pick which professors you want to work with the next thing I want you to do and this is definitely going to be the longest part of your research journey and of writing your entire personal statement it’s going to be research the institution and the different labs so that’s what I did for every single University I applied to I went through their different fields you choose what fields you like but we’re not done now what you do is you go through the different labs within that field so there’s not just gonna be one lab in the fluid dynamics thermodynamics subset there’s gonna be another 20 labs oh okay this professor is doing droplets okay that’s kind of cool oh this professor is doing water splitting okay that’s pretty cool and just find some research that sticks out to you why are we doing this because first you need to know what you’re gonna write and then you need to be specific about it schools don’t just want to let anyone into their school they want to let people that are motivated driven and know what they want so you need to demonstrate that in your letter of motivation so that’s stuck 1 out of 4 but trust me it’s gonna it’s the longest step out of the 4 the second step of writing your personal statement is plan now you’ve done the research for the institution you know exactly what you want and you know why you want it now you need you frame that research to fit into your personal statement so like I said earlier there’s really no correct way to write a personal statement but in general you should have an introduction some middle body paragraphs and a conclusion now we’re not going to worry about the introduction or the conclusion in this section we’re just going to worry about the middle paragraphs so in order to figure out how to frame that research that you just spent like an entire day doing think about using that research to answer the following questions why do you want to study a masters how will this program benefit you what are you aspiring to do in the future and how will this master’s program help you achieve those goals how can your work contribute to the department and university so for example how oldest master’s program helped you achieve your future goals well my future goal is to cure cancer using I don’t know lasers good example because it’s specific and attending this University and working under the supervision of Professor X what helped me achieve my goal because as you can see from this paper Professor X does work in laser technology applied to cancer and I believe that his knowledge will help me further my goal or something like that if you want to be specific and you want to be able to answer these questions using the research you’ve already done in the previous section the next step step three is going to be to write now start with your body paragraphs and just start writing take your questions and answers from the plan part and try to fit them together to create like a cohesive story so it might start off with like here’s my past qualifications here all the projects I’ve done moving into your goals and aspirations and how the school will help you achieve those so try to fake those answers together and create a cohesive story don’t worry so much about having the perfect letter on your first draft just start writing to avoid writer’s block to have your creative juices flowing and then you can always go back and edit later after you’ve written your body paragraphs move on to the conclusion it shouldn’t be really more than two sentences so don’t really don’t worry about it too much pick one of your strongest points that supports your argument your argument being why you should be the one to attend this school program or whatever maybe it’s because of how motivated you are to reach your goals and how this school helped you achieve your goals that’s the one I picked but pick whichever one you like and then finish off the letter and that’s it now after the conclusion move on to the introduction the introduction I like to leave for last because I don’t want you to just sit down to start writing the introduction and already get writer’s block after the first sentence it’s nice to have a little anecdote at the beginning if you can to hook the reader about why you want to be an engineer or scientists or blah blah but if you really can’t think of one then just move on get straight into specifically why you want to study at this university finally we’ve reached the last step number four and that is review I have created a checklist which you can just click the link below in the description enter your email address and this perfect personal statement checklist will get sent to your inbox so the checklist it says things like do you have any cliches wipe that off of your personal statement and check it over the checklist there’s like a lot of different things on the checklist so in the review section just go through the checklist and apply the edits to your personal statement finally get three different people to review your personal statement and at least one native speaker if you can now I know I’m a native speaker but please do not send me your personal statement I do not have time to go through it by on Wednesday I we’ll be doing a live stream on YouTube so if you have any questions about the personal statement bring them to me if you’re working on your personal statement this weekend or throughout the month of December you can tag me on Instagram and I will share that on my story so then we can all suffer together and laugh at how we have no lives and we are just spending the month of December applying to universities just a quick recap research plan write and review click the link in my description and enter your email and I will send you a checklist that will help you in your review process tag me on Instagram I will share your struggle with the entire community and join me for the YouTube live on Wednesday if you like this video please give it a thumbs up if you have any questions about the personal statement leave them in the comments below I’m sure everyone would love to hear about it if you want to see more then please subscribe

Argumentative Essay Example

hello students I have made this video to help you understand the basic format of an argumentative essay remember when we brainstormed and we did that in class activity where we we went over the different parts of the essay where we talked about plastic cups and getting rid of plastic cups well I took the information that you gave me and I put together an essay to kind of show you how the essay is set up you did most of the work in brainstorming your ideas and I’ve put the essay together for you so let’s take a look at ESA the first thing I want you to understand is that all essays have a title have a title that represents the purpose of your essay you should have a very specific title that represents your thesis statement so for example here my thesis statement is about getting rid of the plastic cups so I say you know one way is to stop making plastic cups available to the students and then if you look at the title it says where are all the cups so where are all the cups is kind of associated with the idea that we need to get rid of the plastic cups so certainly there has to be a good title there should be an introduction with background information and thesis statement here I’ve underlined a thesis statement let’s take a look at the background information and let’s see how it connects to the thesis statement okay says here the environmental issues in today’s world are growing more serious by the day as a result it is increasingly important for schools and colleges to teach good environmental habits have you ever seen a student or a teacher take a sip of water then throw the plastic cup away this is not a good habit here at Fujairah women’s college I think we must start taking action to lessen our impacts on the environment one way is to stop making plastic cups available to the students so here background here thesis statement and here remember what we talked about in class our thesis statement we need to be asking someone to take an action that’s what an argumentative essay is and here the action is we want the college to stop making plastic cups available so that’s an action we want the college to take now body paragraph 1 remember topic sentence 1 is the first reason why this is true remember the the idea of it because test well I’m going to give a becuase test here’s my thesis one way is to stop making the plastic cups available to the students in other words one way to protect the environment is to stop making plastic cups because using plastic cups is bad for the environment and because getting rid of plastic cups will be good for the college so this is the this is the first reason this is the first reason why the thesis is true this is the second reason why the thesis is true and that is very very important your topic sentences or the two reasons why the thesis is true okay I’m going to stop making plastic cups available because they’re bad for the environment and because they are good for the college they’re good for the college all right so that’s body paragraph number one is reason number one body paragraph two is reason number two and then we go to the refutation remember I said the refutation is a very different paragraph it’s not like paragraph one and paragraph 2 paragraph 1 gives the first reason and explains it paragraph 2 gives the second reason and explains it the refutation which is body paragraph 3 goes against what other people say against you for example let’s look at the topic sentence many may argue that it is unfair to get rid of the cups after all people need to drink water right then I say something nice like I understand this point of view and then quickly I counter the argument by saying however or on the other hand or using but or some type of contrast word say however instead of using the cups the students can bring their own water bottles which costs very little the inconvenience of the water bottles far outweighs the negative effects on the environments so all this is designed to argue against the fact that many people think it is unfair and I try to say yes I understand but it’s really not unfair because it’s very it’s not very inconvenient to bring your own bottle so here’s a key word however here’s a key statement I understand this point of view and many may argue yes they may argue I understand however they’re wrong okay and if you see here I started with another argument others may argue that getting rid of the cups might have a negative impact on the economy so people say two things they say it’s unfair to get rid of the cups I accepted that that was reasonable and I said why they were wrong now I’m going to look at others may argue that getting rid of the cups may have a negative impact on the economy this is a good argument because of nobody’s making the cups then maybe somebody’s out of a job so it’s my job as the writer to counter to go against what other people say so for example others may argue that getting rid of the cups might have a negative impact on the economy again I say something nice I can see that this is a concern for everybody needs a job right course everybody needs a job we must however see I’m starting a transition I’m going to say why they are wrong we must however as a country looks look towards sustainable job creation this means jobs that are actually good for the earth this means that we need to always seek ways to create jobs that are eco friendly eco friendly means friendly to the earth like making solar panels or the materials to use wind energy in other words yes the job is not available for the plastic cups but maybe the job will be available for someone doing something more eco-friendly like making solar panels and using wind energy certainly if we invest in earth friendly jobs we’ll be better off in the future so the whole point of this paragraph is to to take the arguments that someone else might say see I said we need to get rid of the plastic cups so I have to think and say how will people argue against me so this is what I came up with my first idea was that many will argue that it’s unfair to get rid of the cups others will argue that getting rid of the cups will have a negative impact on the economy so these are the ideas you came up with and I’m trying to show you that you know yes some people may argue this but here’s why they’re wrong that’s the purpose of the refutation paragraph in the conclusion it’s very important that you restate your thesis but in a different way so I said here finally it is clear that cups must go at for general women’s college I made a mistake here the you know I think I meant to say yeah I meant to say to use to use the cups is an old concept that may have been acceptable in the 70s the 80s and the 90s but not anymore we must change our ways and start with the cups here at the college and starting with the cups here at the college is certainly a reasonable start so we’ve got introduction with background information thesis statement a thesis statement that requires an action and we’ve got topic sentence number one which is the first reason why the thesis is true topic sentence number two is the second reason the thesis is true and then the refutation many argue this but they’re wrong others argue this and they’re wrong restated thesis statement finally it’s clear cup the cups must go we must get rid of them so I’m restating my thesis okay all right that’s the basics of the format now I’m going to give you the basics of how to develop the body paragraph okay when we go to a body paragraph clearly we have the topic sentence then we support each topic sentence with two main ideas in other words two reasons why the topic sentence is true so I said one main reason is that using plastic bands is bad bad for the environment I’m sorry using plastic cups is bad for the environment first reason is making cups creates dangerous greenhouse gases and then I explained and I detail that information I said it’s it creates dangerous greenhouse gases so here in this blue area I have to explain that and make it important and significant for the reader they have to understand that you know I can’t just say cups are dangerous I need to explain that and that’s called development what you’re looking at here in the blue is development it’s details and information here I move on secondly in other words the second reason why cups are bad for the environment secondly as we can see the cups are often not placed in the bin and they end up blown into the ocean this is a serious problem because as the plastics slowly break down into small particles it makes its way into the fish if the fish have too much plastic in them they will surely die so first reason dangerous greenhouse gases second reason the fish will die because the plastics are actually blown into the ocean all these two one two they support the idea that using plastic cups is bad for the environment second body paragraph it is also clear that getting rid of the plastic cups will be good for the college firstly this is the first reason why it will be good for the college the cups are not thrown in the bin and this creates a negative impression or negative image for people who visit the college and then I give examples for example if you look in the empty classrooms in the afternoon the cups are scattered around the college the floors the desks the hallways this does not give the college a good image with the public who often come to the college and evening for classes so all that that I just read this is all information the first reason why this topic sentence is true and then of course I go to a second reason secondly not having cups available will save money for the college simply put the college will not have to buy thousands of cups use each semester this money can be used to buy books for the library or go on some field trips instead so I’m giving the second reason the second reason why it’s good for the college and then of course the reputation as we talked you know many will argue right many will argue however they’re wrong others may argue however they’re wrong and I give reasons why they’re wrong and most of all I addressed the specific argument okay here if they say it’s unfair I have to say how it’s fair if they say others may argue that is bad for the economy then I must discuss why it’s not bad for the economy then in the end I restate the thesis and when that happens there’s a good chance you’re going to have a pretty good essay I hope this helps I’m going to supply you with a soft copy of this essay in Microsoft Word so you can read it and look at it between that and the video you should have a pretty good understanding of how to do an argumentative essay okay ladies I really appreciate your time and efforts thank you

Argumentative Essay Example

hello students I have made this video to help you understand the basic format of an argumentative essay remember when we brainstormed and we did that in class activity where we we went over the different parts of the essay where we talked about plastic cups and getting rid of plastic cups well I took the information that you gave me and I put together an essay to kind of show you how the essay is set up you did most of the work in brainstorming your ideas and I’ve put the essay together for you so let’s take a look at ESA the first thing I want you to understand is that all essays have a title have a title that represents the purpose of your essay you should have a very specific title that represents your thesis statement so for example here my thesis statement is about getting rid of the plastic cups so I say you know one way is to stop making plastic cups available to the students and then if you look at the title it says where are all the cups so where are all the cups is kind of associated with the idea that we need to get rid of the plastic cups so certainly there has to be a good title there should be an introduction with background information and thesis statement here I’ve underlined a thesis statement let’s take a look at the background information and let’s see how it connects to the thesis statement okay says here the environmental issues in today’s world are growing more serious by the day as a result it is increasingly important for schools and colleges to teach good environmental habits have you ever seen a student or a teacher take a sip of water then throw the plastic cup away this is not a good habit here at Fujairah women’s college I think we must start taking action to lessen our impacts on the environment one way is to stop making plastic cups available to the students so here background here thesis statement and here remember what we talked about in class our thesis statement we need to be asking someone to take an action that’s what an argumentative essay is and here the action is we want the college to stop making plastic cups available so that’s an action we want the college to take now body paragraph 1 remember topic sentence 1 is the first reason why this is true remember the the idea of it because test well I’m going to give a becuase test here’s my thesis one way is to stop making the plastic cups available to the students in other words one way to protect the environment is to stop making plastic cups because using plastic cups is bad for the environment and because getting rid of plastic cups will be good for the college so this is the this is the first reason this is the first reason why the thesis is true this is the second reason why the thesis is true and that is very very important your topic sentences or the two reasons why the thesis is true okay I’m going to stop making plastic cups available because they’re bad for the environment and because they are good for the college they’re good for the college all right so that’s body paragraph number one is reason number one body paragraph two is reason number two and then we go to the refutation remember I said the refutation is a very different paragraph it’s not like paragraph one and paragraph 2 paragraph 1 gives the first reason and explains it paragraph 2 gives the second reason and explains it the refutation which is body paragraph 3 goes against what other people say against you for example let’s look at the topic sentence many may argue that it is unfair to get rid of the cups after all people need to drink water right then I say something nice like I understand this point of view and then quickly I counter the argument by saying however or on the other hand or using but or some type of contrast word say however instead of using the cups the students can bring their own water bottles which costs very little the inconvenience of the water bottles far outweighs the negative effects on the environments so all this is designed to argue against the fact that many people think it is unfair and I try to say yes I understand but it’s really not unfair because it’s very it’s not very inconvenient to bring your own bottle so here’s a key word however here’s a key statement I understand this point of view and many may argue yes they may argue I understand however they’re wrong okay and if you see here I started with another argument others may argue that getting rid of the cups might have a negative impact on the economy so people say two things they say it’s unfair to get rid of the cups I accepted that that was reasonable and I said why they were wrong now I’m going to look at others may argue that getting rid of the cups may have a negative impact on the economy this is a good argument because of nobody’s making the cups then maybe somebody’s out of a job so it’s my job as the writer to counter to go against what other people say so for example others may argue that getting rid of the cups might have a negative impact on the economy again I say something nice I can see that this is a concern for everybody needs a job right course everybody needs a job we must however see I’m starting a transition I’m going to say why they are wrong we must however as a country looks look towards sustainable job creation this means jobs that are actually good for the earth this means that we need to always seek ways to create jobs that are eco friendly eco friendly means friendly to the earth like making solar panels or the materials to use wind energy in other words yes the job is not available for the plastic cups but maybe the job will be available for someone doing something more eco-friendly like making solar panels and using wind energy certainly if we invest in earth friendly jobs we’ll be better off in the future so the whole point of this paragraph is to to take the arguments that someone else might say see I said we need to get rid of the plastic cups so I have to think and say how will people argue against me so this is what I came up with my first idea was that many will argue that it’s unfair to get rid of the cups others will argue that getting rid of the cups will have a negative impact on the economy so these are the ideas you came up with and I’m trying to show you that you know yes some people may argue this but here’s why they’re wrong that’s the purpose of the refutation paragraph in the conclusion it’s very important that you restate your thesis but in a different way so I said here finally it is clear that cups must go at for general women’s college I made a mistake here the you know I think I meant to say yeah I meant to say to use to use the cups is an old concept that may have been acceptable in the 70s the 80s and the 90s but not anymore we must change our ways and start with the cups here at the college and starting with the cups here at the college is certainly a reasonable start so we’ve got introduction with background information thesis statement a thesis statement that requires an action and we’ve got topic sentence number one which is the first reason why the thesis is true topic sentence number two is the second reason the thesis is true and then the refutation many argue this but they’re wrong others argue this and they’re wrong restated thesis statement finally it’s clear cup the cups must go we must get rid of them so I’m restating my thesis okay all right that’s the basics of the format now I’m going to give you the basics of how to develop the body paragraph okay when we go to a body paragraph clearly we have the topic sentence then we support each topic sentence with two main ideas in other words two reasons why the topic sentence is true so I said one main reason is that using plastic bands is bad bad for the environment I’m sorry using plastic cups is bad for the environment first reason is making cups creates dangerous greenhouse gases and then I explained and I detail that information I said it’s it creates dangerous greenhouse gases so here in this blue area I have to explain that and make it important and significant for the reader they have to understand that you know I can’t just say cups are dangerous I need to explain that and that’s called development what you’re looking at here in the blue is development it’s details and information here I move on secondly in other words the second reason why cups are bad for the environment secondly as we can see the cups are often not placed in the bin and they end up blown into the ocean this is a serious problem because as the plastics slowly break down into small particles it makes its way into the fish if the fish have too much plastic in them they will surely die so first reason dangerous greenhouse gases second reason the fish will die because the plastics are actually blown into the ocean all these two one two they support the idea that using plastic cups is bad for the environment second body paragraph it is also clear that getting rid of the plastic cups will be good for the college firstly this is the first reason why it will be good for the college the cups are not thrown in the bin and this creates a negative impression or negative image for people who visit the college and then I give examples for example if you look in the empty classrooms in the afternoon the cups are scattered around the college the floors the desks the hallways this does not give the college a good image with the public who often come to the college and evening for classes so all that that I just read this is all information the first reason why this topic sentence is true and then of course I go to a second reason secondly not having cups available will save money for the college simply put the college will not have to buy thousands of cups use each semester this money can be used to buy books for the library or go on some field trips instead so I’m giving the second reason the second reason why it’s good for the college and then of course the reputation as we talked you know many will argue right many will argue however they’re wrong others may argue however they’re wrong and I give reasons why they’re wrong and most of all I addressed the specific argument okay here if they say it’s unfair I have to say how it’s fair if they say others may argue that is bad for the economy then I must discuss why it’s not bad for the economy then in the end I restate the thesis and when that happens there’s a good chance you’re going to have a pretty good essay I hope this helps I’m going to supply you with a soft copy of this essay in Microsoft Word so you can read it and look at it between that and the video you should have a pretty good understanding of how to do an argumentative essay okay ladies I really appreciate your time and efforts thank you